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...And the Word Eludes Me...
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...And the Word Eludes Me... This is like trying to write with my hands tied behind my back... there just doesn't seem to be any way I can do it. I know what needs to be said and I know how it should be said. It's just that the right word to get it all started just eludes me. I could tell you I would capture a million stars just to light your way from sundown to sunrise... but you know I can't do that. I would gladly chase down dragons and fight their fire with all that I am... but you know that just isn't true either. So, what good is an imagination if I can't use wistful, wishful thoughts to get you to understand just how much I do care... and want... and need... and value... and yearn... and absolutely at times, just ache, for you? Even a clown can catch a smile or a bemused look for doing silly things. If I were to dance about in size thirty-two shoes and squeeze a horn and stumble and fall down with an amazed look in my eyes, would that win one of your easy smiles for me? I don't know... I just don't know. The one word that I'm sure would win you over just won't come to my mind, and venture its way to whisper softly in your ear. Every dictionary I've searched; every memory and everything I've ever thought to be perfect... doesn't have any idea of the word that would fit. Perhaps... there just isn't a word. And just perhaps, I could lose any chance of getting you to understand all the wondrous, soft, gentle thoughts I have lying just beneath the surface that you can't see... or feel. The word eludes me... so my thoughts can't be free to find a voice you can understand. The word just eludes me. So look close into my eyes. Maybe there, you will see the unspoken words I have for you... and you can begin to measure the depth of my love for you. Perhaps then, there won't be any need for elusive words. © copyright 2007 by unlistedone |
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Oh so very beautiful and most touching my friend...thank you...*hugs*
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11/22/2007 7:44 pm |
Oh, man... I've been searching for that word too... great poem, my friend...  Not all who wander are lost.
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How completely and utterly beautiful. I found my mind playing a movie to go along with the words you wrote. (((sigh)))) I would give my heart and soul for a man to say these things to me. Unfortunately.......I don't have the "word" either. Well done my special friend. 143....always. 
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you give us love in your written words...a window to your soul..  []   Seduce my mind and my body
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I will try and respond here by Friday... too many things going on right now. I've read your comments and I thank each of you. Keep lovin' each other... many hugs to each.... me
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~hugz~ 
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Shy... I'm glad you find it beautiful and most touching. It was kinda frustrating to write this one... because I was really looking for "that elusive word." As you can see, I never found it. Sweet hug, me ~ ~ ~ Jo... the (=) is enough, thanks.... warm hug for you, me ~ ~ ~ Flinky... I think we all look for that word at some point in our lives... one of the reasons we "wander." A gentle hug, my sweet friend, me ~ ~ ~ Angel... Someday, you'll have to tell me about that movie. It sounds interesting. 143,2 me ~ ~ ~ Becky... moving in and around your heart is a wonderous place to be... and it's soooooo big and warm. It fits you. warm, soft hug, me ~ ~ ~ Sexy... I try to do just that. I glad it made you feel that way. And there's a door to my soul. You can enter anytime through it. You don't have to gaze through the window. Warm, tender hug, me ~ ~ ~ GotD... Ah goddess... thank you for one of your very special hugz. They are always most appreciated. (I've missed you!) A warm hug always given to you... anytime... me
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