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The City is Split in Half  

Mariana_Trench_ 50F
1973 posts
4/21/2011 11:49 am
The City is Split in Half

I’m a clock tower hovering in a space of no time

Meanwhile, the city is split in half
A geode of skyscrapers -

weeds sprawling over and boisterous and loud…

On my side

- your side is empty -

You are a fossil vortex and your vices

Are what is left
Of this season, your nemesis are

death, the Blood Moon,
and the scent of a particular spice,
Whose name escapes you

Someday we will meet and I will discover
which spice it is

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Image: "Diana, The Blood Moon" by Stephen Lucas




wildnwanton 61F
19428 posts
4/26/2011 10:34 am

    Quoting Mariana_Trench_:
    Wildnwanton:

    Thank you. Your appreciation and understanding are really affirming. I feel that way about your photography. Blown away.

    How are things with the job and the family? I know this year has been full of changes for you. I hope all the best for you! Hey if I ever make my way down there, do you still have access to tattoo equipment? That would be kinda cool, a tattoo by you (or work on my exisiting ones, two need it!)

    MT
Actually, no...I don't have the equipment any longer. I blogged about it a couple of weeks back, I traded it to a friend of mine to get Mr his first tattoo. My friend suffered a robbery a few years ago, and he lost a lot of his machines to the thieves and he had been struggling to recoup some of his losses.
But if you ever make it out this way, I can still hook you up with some very fine artists! (I's connected like that lol).
Things with the family are just fine, still growing, still becoming what it is. I'm still happy as a clam and so are they.

"Shall I tell you the secret of the true scholar? It is this: every man I meet is my master in some point, and in that I learn of him."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/25/2011 4:15 pm

    Quoting  :

Gotcha. HAHA (sorry not "at" you but with you...) I did add a bit of a subtext, didn't I?

Well, I am not a huge fan of coffee, but I like herbal tea!

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/25/2011 4:14 pm

    Quoting  :

Thanks. To be frank, this problem has been bothering me since late December. In the last 4-6 weeks I have not stopped bleeding (although only excessively last week) and it's been hard for me. I have not discussed it because I've been working with my doctor tryingn to figure it out. At this point it's possible it's any one of or a combination of a half dozen problems. Worst case scenerio is cancer, of course, and then it gets easier from there. Unfortunately, I also have cancer in a leg as well (albeit only slightly malignant, meaning I just get an MIR each each to check on the status) but - I really don't like the idea of all of these body parts failing or aging. It's been abruptly so in the last few years an assortment of such concerns. I will just wait and see in the next few weeks after I have an ultrasound etc.

Thanks for the hug!

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/24/2011 7:48 am

    Quoting  :

I have been having some difficulties recently and this has including some problems with my period, and excessive bleeding. I suppose they came forward in these lines. I wonder if it is so beautiful now?

Thanks for visiting!

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/24/2011 7:46 am

    Quoting wildnwanton:
    You know, I am wondering if there will ever come a day that I don't come here to read and leave a bit breathless and blown away.
Wildnwanton:

Thank you. Your appreciation and understanding are really affirming. I feel that way about your photography. Blown away.

How are things with the job and the family? I know this year has been full of changes for you. I hope all the best for you! Hey if I ever make my way down there, do you still have access to tattoo equipment? That would be kinda cool, a tattoo by you (or work on my exisiting ones, two need it!)

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/24/2011 7:45 am

    Quoting  :

Yeah I'm not sure what you are saying. Maybe it will help if I explain that I never do a poem *for* a picture. I always do the poem first, and then find a picture or look through my saved pictures for one that seems suitable. Based upon your remarks, it seems I paired these two well, if you think I found the picture first and wrote 'around' it.

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/24/2011 7:43 am

    Quoting VioletDeliriums:
    One reason that I like poetry is that it makes us think and revisit them. What brings you back is the beauty of the words, and maybe one day, if you visit it enough times, you get to learn what it says to you. I've had several poems like that in my life. This one is similar.

    The two things that I think are compelling here are the lines about the sides (mine and yours) and the spice.
That is true, people have to put themselves into it and think a bit. The whole story is not provided - to a varying degree. Think about *if you will* how it reads if the two sides are...two sides of one person. Or, one side is me, the other side is a person I haven't met yet who completes me.

I hope this tidbit helps! Thanks for visiting, as always!

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/24/2011 7:37 am

    Quoting  :

I am flattered, thank you. I think you are saying let's do things together all night till we are exhausted. Then, let's sleep late and wake up for a relaxing brunch. However, you are married, so that's going to need to remain a textal relationship. I think. Sorry.

MT


wildnwanton 61F
19428 posts
4/22/2011 4:31 am

You know, I am wondering if there will ever come a day that I don't come here to read and leave a bit breathless and blown away.

"Shall I tell you the secret of the true scholar? It is this: every man I meet is my master in some point, and in that I learn of him."
~Ralph Waldo Emerson


VioletDeliriums 56T  
3527 posts
4/21/2011 7:05 pm

One reason that I like poetry is that it makes us think and revisit them. What brings you back is the beauty of the words, and maybe one day, if you visit it enough times, you get to learn what it says to you. I've had several poems like that in my life. This one is similar.

The two things that I think are compelling here are the lines about the sides (mine and yours) and the spice.


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