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Blogs > Mariana_Trench_ > poetic disambiguation

Many Erotic Haiku  

Mariana_Trench_ 50F
1973 posts
1/31/2010 11:55 pm
Many Erotic Haiku
hard flesh meets soft flesh
electric arcs of pleasure
in the dark, a cry

tightly her legs close
her refusal enticing
breathlessly I plea

my fingers pressing
down, the moment drawing
out...up... it will come

imagining you
smoothing creases, shuffling
in your chair- so hard

rest like a pebble...
round smooth warm from the sun
your tongue caressing

my body shifts towards
your solid firm thighs open
upwards arching back

That first time
my middle-finger slipped into
your warm wet cleft

you can not believe
my amazement at being
As wet as I am

Escaping little birds
My moans my cries dissolving
You awakening

she knelt in between
Too trembling to stand
he licked salty skin

"Intense? Yes," she said.
Who imagines this from words?
They evoke pure lust.

Rummaging around
Inside your mind, seeking some
Hot sanctuary

The feel of it against
My tender inner thighs - abrupt -
Melting sticky urges

He calls me lustful
Fill me with lust I beg him
Unable to stop

I will send you mine
All of it, you can take it
Infinity within

He found her tiny
Fingertips sliding slowly
Up and down his spine

She told him, coax me
Tease me, warm me up till
Coming- an hour straight

Antique Japanese Kyoto Shunga
(erotic woodblock print)
Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
4/20/2011 3:52 pm
    Quoting  :
But how about:

"Warm caress of flesh..."

For line one, I mean.

MT

(Get me, all uppity and poetic and shit?)


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
11/1/2010 6:11 pm
    Quoting rm_WordsWolf:
    Rapt, wrapped in your legs
    trickling sweet love nectar
    down my chin, chest, charms.

    Pastiche of pink slick
    sticky flesh rolled round the tongue
    coaxing dew from prick.

    Points of light, wait
    sparks ascend my spine lighting
    realization.

    My .02¢
    WW.
The use of the word 'pastiche' in particular is stunning. Well, and I love 'sparks ascend my spine...' You know what is super sexy? I bet you do. It's when - two lovers write back and forth to one another, via e-mail or IM or old fashioned letters through the PO.

I have done the old-fashioned thing, have you? (Recently, I mean)

XOXO Thank you for these, WW.

MT


rm_WordsWolf 57M
Ask me for a photo
311 posts
10/25/2010 7:58 pm

 Rapt, wrapped in your legs
trickling sweet love nectar
down my chin, chest, charms.

Pastiche of pink slick
sticky flesh rolled round the tongue
coaxing dew from prick.

Points of light, wait
sparks ascend my spine lighting
realization.

My .02¢
WW.


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
3/6/2010 5:54 pm
    Quoting aspiringbo:
    This is a lovely thread.

    It is unmistakable: this is my favorite by far:

    "Rummaging around
    Inside your mind, seeking some
    Hot sanctuary"

    The assonance and alliterations in the second line, the contrasting images in the last (paralleled with contrasting syllable length so well), and 'rummaging' is such a wonderfully aural word. And with around, even moreso. Plus, it's such a familiar activity, everyday in many ways - it refers, for me, to both the obvious erotic fantasies but also the moment to moment reframings I (and perhaps all sentient beings) tend to do with the Real. Yep: Head over heels about this one.
Dear Mr. Aspiringbo,

That is also my own personal favorite and I have even considered adding it to the 'title page' of my entire blog. For I feel, actually, that a reader who is a thoughtful reader is doing precisely that...and a poster who is a thoughtful poster is enabling me to return that favor (so I am rummaging around inside your mind, sir.)

MT


aspiringbo 42M  
791 posts
3/5/2010 10:45 pm

 This is a lovely thread.

It is unmistakable: this is my favorite by far:

"Rummaging around
Inside your mind, seeking some
Hot sanctuary"

The assonance and alliterations in the second line, the contrasting images in the last (paralleled with contrasting syllable length so well), and 'rummaging' is such a wonderfully aural word. And with around, even moreso. Plus, it's such a familiar activity, everyday in many ways - it refers, for me, to both the obvious erotic fantasies but also the moment to moment reframings I (and perhaps all sentient beings) tend to do with the Real. Yep: Head over heels about this one.
"The greatest worth is self-mastery
..quality is seeking to serve others
..precept is continual awareness
..medicine is the emptiness of all
..action is not conforming with the world
..magic is transmuting passions
..wisdom is seeing deeply"


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
2/26/2010 12:40 pm
    Quoting  :
Dear Mr. Bliss,

If I did not know any better I would say you are positively hitting on me? Could this be? Do you want to tie me up and do filthy profane unspeakable and yet highly pleasurable things to me?

Inquiringly,

MT


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
2/1/2010 4:27 pm
    Quoting  :
Dear Mr. Bliss,

As do I, and kimono and obi for that matter. I used to have an antique obi I was fond of being bound up with....those are quite long, you know...for years it was a very pleasurable thing to both touch and use....hmmm where did I stash that sash?

Perplexed,

Mariana_Trench_


ravi7233 58M

2/1/2010 12:16 am

 wow
Its gr8 would love the same.


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