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Love the sugestions and am going to work on this and repost soon hopefully a few more sugestions soon and if someone would like to take this story and re write it I would love to see what someone else can do with it....
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Thank you for the suggestions...yes my grammar is horrible......I need to figure that out .... and I will work on the word changes...... Thank you so much for the comments....I get many that read but never comments..... Todd or MrToad
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5/2/2009 5:26 am |
Nice story. Some people tend to concentrate more on the amount of dots you use though lol. I found my mind wandering to how bad your grammar is and not what was under her wrap. x (Oh - Don't use the word cum so many times. Phrase the words differently eg , My load. And if you do insist on constantly putting "cum" then add words such as thick, hot, creamy. You get the idea.) x CafeAuLait224 x
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