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A Moment In Time - Studio  

justpervin29 50M
266 posts
4/20/2017 4:11 pm
A Moment In Time - Studio


He rolled over
and found an empty spot.
The spot beside him
upon the bed,
was gone
save a slight<b> depression
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It was the faint
barely audible
notes A and C minor
that stirred
his slumber.
The blurry blue hue
of the numbers on the clock
slowly registered the time
to be 2:18.
His feet find
the cool touch
of the hardwood floor.
Wiping the sleep and haze
from his tired eyes
he stands
and sees her glasses
on her bedside.
He makes his way
around the bed,
shuffles across the floor
and out the door.
Half way down the hallway
his brain recognizes
how good
the carpet feels
beneath his toes.
Soft caressing cushion,
unlike the cool hardwood
that awaited him
later in his trek.
Several moments later
it dawns on him
he probably should have
put on his slippers
that were beside the bed.
Each step down the hall
makes the dancing whispers
sound a lil more clear
a lil more sweeter.
The haze of sleep
still hangs heavy upon him
but he is able
to navigate his way
down the stairs.
The cracked sliver
of light
splintered the darkness of the house.
She was in her studio
and the door wasn’t
fully shut.
The cadence of the start stop and pause
to the music
was her mind evaluating,
reevaluating,
changing,
and changing again
the musical sculpture
she was carving
from her mind.
She hummed the words
that weren’t fully formed
in her mind
not on the pyrus before her.
He watches
her bare feet
and painted toes
dance upon the pedals
as she tries
to bring the vision to life.
She is lost
within herself
feeding the world
her music.
The tired eyes,
the fly away strands
of her hair.
Just her
and her music
and nothing
could ever be as beautiful
as what he was witnessing.
Her nightgown
clung to her every curve
and the beauty
of her in action
filled him with
a warmth.
This was a sight
more beautiful
than any framed picture
that hung upon the walls
or graced the mantle
above the stone fireplace.
This was a moment in time
that made all other moments
worthwhile.
Her body was tired,
her soul was wrestling
with the birth of its vision,
and her mind
sought to find balance.
She sang
the newly created line
over and over.
The piano
sometimes sang with her,
other times
she sang solo.
Each time
there was a new inflection,
a change in breathing.
He couldn’t really tell
which was better.
Each iteration all sounded great to him,
but knew
it all made a difference in the end.
She scribbled something down,
that would be translated
into the final piece.
The softness of her eyes
had been forged
with a warrior’s resolve
as she battled the universe
to grant her this discovery.
To this day
he was still amazed
at how she created beauty
out of nothingness.
He was taken back,
to when they were walking
after supper
on their second date.
He asked her
what it was to write a song
and create something
from nothing.
She had stopped walking,
making him follow suit.
Pausing a moment later,
she replied.
“I don’t create from nothing.
It more like a garden.
Songs are born of emotions,
of history,
of life.
The music is always there
I am just the lucky one
that sometimes
waters the seed
and lets the flower bloom.”
It was in that moment,
he had fallen in love with her.
Here she was,
years later
still watering seeds
so the beauty she finds
can be shared with the world.
At least for tonight,
it would be beauty
just for her
as she tended the
ebony and ivory garden.
Several more starts,
and just as many stops
lead to a pause
in her process.
He slowly opened
the studio door
and made his way in.
Handing the glasses to her.
He smiled.
“You should have these hun.”
She smiled and thanked him.
He didn’t want to break the flow
but was overcome
with conflicting emotions.
Leaning down ,
he cradled her face
in the palm of his hand.
“You are just so beautiful,
I don’t think I tell you that enough.
I’m sorry for that.
I love you.”
She saw the sadness
hidden in his eyes
from the guilt he felt
for not telling her enough
of what he showed her
every day.
Her eyes softened
as she smiled.
“I know honey.
Your fine.
Where is this coming from?”
He just smiled.
“Just wanted you to know
you still are so beautiful is all.
I will leave you
to your masterpiece.”
His lips pressed
against hers.
“Love you hun,
I’ll be upstairs.”
Her hand
touched his.
“Love you too teddybear.”
Her forehead crinkled
ever so slightly
as she tried to figure out
the randomness
of his statement.
She smiled as she watched him
head towards the door
and immersed herself
binding herself into the strings
and cords
that captured and trapped
her in this moment.
Walking thru the doorway,
he slowly shut the door
to the studio,
leaving it open
just a sliver,
with their kiss
still upon his lips.
This way at least,
the sounds of her
would accompany him
to bed.
He smiled
as he crawled
back into bed.
The space beside him
was no longer empty.
She wasn’t there physically
but she was with him,
as his eyes closed
for the rest of the night.

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justpervin29 50M
2598 posts
4/20/2017 4:15 pm

Not a very "erotic" piece but was a beautiful moment (least in my head it was) that formed in this empty noggin of mine that i think helps highlight how intimacy isnt always sexual or physical in any way. Intimacty can be simply a connection, and how an innocuous moment for one, could be a treasured memory for another. Not my best piece but was a beautiful moment that was bouncing around. Hope you enjoyed

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FruitLoopLace3 48F

4/20/2017 6:16 pm

Beautifully wrote as usual Hun. Thank You for posting. The detail brings the story to life. The part where she says Songs are born of emotions,of history,of life.I loved that part. Just sent me into my own world. I like that You write beauty and not just erotica. Its nice to read a piece that is delicate and intimate with meaning that touches the heart. Thanks again for posting, TCWL-Fruity


justpervin29 replies on 4/21/2017 3:01 am:
Thank you Fruit so glad you like it and that it resonated with you I always love to hear what you think and as always thank you for such kind words

backdoorgirl101 56F
26 posts
4/21/2017 1:08 am

Damn jp ... you just keep getting better and better.... it never stops amazing me the depth u reach so well, do the world a favor...NEVER stop, please , the world would be a lesser place without your words to soften it.... thank you for sharing yourself in this way...

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Melanie aka BDG101


justpervin29 replies on 4/21/2017 3:04 am:
BDG thank you hun so glad you liked and always thank you for you never ending support and wonderful feedback it is all so very greatly appreciated

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